Monday, May 12, 2014

Three Poems (Madeline Griwac)

Three Poems

By: Madeline Griwac



Themes of Growing Up

A lesson that Janie learned
Was that growing up was hard
No matter how much she yearned
She could not even play with cards.

There were so many people
That told her no, no, no
She began to hate the steeple
Under which she was forced to go.

Waiting for her marriage,
She had little time to bide,
For in her union to Logan Killicks,
Her very first dream died.

She dreamed of a sweet and lovely thing
A marriage full of love
But with the promise of that ring
She was not able to bluff.

Reality came and stung like a bee
It smacked her with its hand,
For with that dead dream she could see
A plan that was less than grand.

A little girl she was no more
For she became a woman,
But as the dream was behind a door
She wondered if she could find a key again.




Themes of Freedom and Independence

Is there a single thing
That makes you feel alive?
Janie has that thing
And oh! It makes her heart sing
Even when the times are hard.

How does she feel when that thing she loves
Is forced under a cover?
She is forced to keep her glory hidden
By a not so loving lover.

This thing that resembles life
Can no longer flaunt its freedom
It diminishes her love and only augments strife.
Jody, acting like a demon,
Says for Janie to uncover her handsome hair,
Would be an act of treason

She is constricted
She is abused
Jodie’s hand is fastened tight
There is nothing she can do
His rules might ruin her life

On that day of doom,
When Jody’s life was taken,
Janie tried her best to mourn
But did it out of fear
She desired not to face the townsfolk woeful scorn

Her eyes did all the crying
But her soul could do no lying
She removed the soiled rag that held captive her glory
And as her hair cascaded down her neck
She knew she was not sorry

She heaved a sigh of relief
No longer felt oppressed
And as the flames licked higher, higher
So did the freedom surging inside her


Themes of Conflict

Janie said yes to Johnny Taylor
Nanny said no
Janie listened

Janie said yes to dreams of love
Fate said no
Janie had to listen

Janie said yes to Joe Starks
Logan Killicks tried to say no
Janie did not listen

Jody said yes, tie up Janie’s hair
Janie tried to say no
Jody did not listen

Jody said yes to anger
Janie said no
Jody was unable to listen

Death said yes to Jody Starks
Janie did not try to say no
Death would not have listened anyway

Tea Cake said yes to Janie
Janie hesitantly did not say no
Tea Cake of course listened

Janie said yes to marriage
Tea Cake said yes
Janie did not regret that she listened

Nature said yes to disaster
Janie tried to say no
Nature did not listen

Rabies said yes to Tea Cake
Janie tried to scream no
Rabies did not listen

When there were no more yes’ or no’s
And Janie thought she could listen no more
She realized
Her eyes were watching God.




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